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Scene Alchemy: Maps, Guides, and Lost Questions
Throughout the Scene Alchemy series, we’ve been looking at the single greatest problem I see as a developmental editor: a lack of scene structure, which…
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August 2026
Putting It All Together: Quiet Scenes, Pacing, and Breaking the Rules (Scene Alchemy #8)
Speculative fiction scenes come in all shapes and sizes, but the best tend to follow the same rhyming scheme:
Aug 19
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New Goals: The End is Never the End (Scene Alchemy #7)
Have you ever beta read for someone else, or exchanged feedback in a writing group?
Aug 5
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July 2026
Complications: The Art of Getting Lost (Scene Alchemy #6)
You’d be forgiven for thinking a scene ends with the outcome.
Jul 22
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Outcome: Your Crossroads of Consequence (Scene Alchemy #5)
The outcome of a scene is where we find out if all the character’s hard work has paid off.
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June 2026
Try/Fail Cycles: The Engine Room of Story (Scene Alchemy #4)
The secret to page-turning tension? Try/fail cycles. Learn how "yes, but" and "no, and" create momentum, build anticipation, and keep readers asking…
Jun 24
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Obstacles: The Point of Ignition (Scene Alchemy #3)
Conflict isn't just fighting. Learn how to use obstacles to ignite tension, raise stakes, and force your character to adapt, fail, and grow.
Jun 10
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May 2026
Action: Where Your Character Meets the Road (Scene Alchemy #2)
The single greatest way that speculative fiction authors can strengthen their novels is this:
May 27
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Goals: Your Narrative North Star (Scene Alchemy #1)
You don’t need to spend thousands to start editing your novel.
May 13
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April 2026
I didn’t believe in writing communities. Then I started one
Five years of silence. A community I never planned. And the slow, surprising shift that proved me wrong.
Apr 29
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Why Your Fight Scenes Feel Boring (And How to Fix Them)
Are your fight scenes boring readers? A developmental editor reveals 3 common mistakes that kill tension—and how to fix them in 10 minutes.
Apr 15
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If Stories Were Your First Safe Place, This Is For You
A guide to writing from our wounds, crafting healing stories, and facing painful truths.
Apr 1
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